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Excellent, this is it! You even did the side stories, it looks like!
"What has MoM ever done for me lately?"
Very glad could at least somewhat enjoy your time with the MacVell family. Given what they go through later, I replay those happy days at the start from time to time…
>"who was the target audience"While the following is decent in Japan (45k dlsite followers), you're exactly right. A potential reader needs to have this very particular mix of cheap free time, idealism, and perversity to get invested… Limiting things to very strange people.
I'd love to simply write the author, Kashiwagi Manuri, off as a cynic only setting things up for a stronger shamewank later, but there's no way he could dedicate that much attention and effort into the world if it was all mere set dressing… I think he's actually some kind of embittered romantic that buries his sappiness under an NTR irony shield.
I'll tell you that chapter 2 only has a couple ctrl-skippable h-scenes (masturbation related) if you wanted to play a bit further to see the establishment of the game's plot…
But I appreciate enough of that you held your nose to see chapter one to the end. Especially if porn games aren't your cup of tea.
Now to get to amending those mistakes (and deleting the links so nobody else can see my shame…)